
The Elements of the Academic Essay
Thesis:
Your main insight or idea about a text or topic, and the main proposition (though it may
have several parts) that your essay demonstrates. It should be true but
arguable (not obviously or patently true, but one alternative among several),
be limited enough in scope to be argued in a short composition and with
available evidence, and get to the heart of the text or topic being analyzed
(not be peripheral). It should be given early (not just be impliedthough its
fullest and sharpest statement may come later), and it should govern the whole
essay (not disappear in places).
Motive:
The reason, which you give at the start of your essay, why someone might want
to read an essay on this topic: why it isn't just obvious, why there's some
doubt about the matter, why it requires careful explanation. This usually means
showing either that other people have or might have a view different from yours,
or that they are or might be puzzled or conflicted or curious about the topic.
The others you mention or imagine should not be straw dummies; you need to make
clear that their misapprehension or rival claim can be argued for (that there's
a plausible counter-argument, an argument and not just a claim) or that their
puzzlement or uncertainty is understandablethat your idea is one that
an intelligent reader might really overlook. Your motive thus won't necessarily
be the reason you got interested in the topic, or the personal motivation behind
your engagement with it: this could be private and idiosyncratic, whereas your
motive is what you say to show that your argument isn't idiosyncratic,
but rather is of interest to any serious student of your topic. Defining motive
should be the main business of your introductory paragraphs, where it is usually
introduced by some form of the complicating word "But."
Evidence:
The datafacts, examples, detailsthat you refer
to, quote, or summarize to support your thesis. There should be enough evidence
to be persuasive; it needs to be the right kind of evidence to support
the thesis (with no obvious pieces of evidence overlooked); it needs to be
sufficiently concrete for the reader to trust it (e.g. in
analyzing a text, it often helps to find one or two key or representative
passages to quote and focus on); and if summarized, it needs to be summarized accurately
and fairly (not suppress data that doesn't fit your thesis and might be
counter-evidence).
Analysis:
The work of breaking down, interpreting, and
commenting upon your data, of saying what can be inferred from the data such
that it supports a thesis, is evidence for a claim. Analysis is what you
do with data when you go beyond observing or summarizing it: you show how its
detail or parts contribute to a whole or how causes contribute to a particular
effect or quality; you draw out the significance or implication not apparent to
a superficial view, making clear the logic you are using. Analysis is what
makes the writer feel present, as a distinct and active mind; so your essay
should do more analyzing than it does summarizing or quoting.
Keyterms:
The recurring terms or basic conceptual oppositions
that your argument and analysis rest upon, usually literal but sometimes
metaphors. An essay's keyterms should be clear in meaning (defined if
necessary) and appear throughout (not be abandoned half-way); they should be
appropriate for the subject at hand (not unfair or too simple, e.g. implying
a false or constraining opposition); and they should not be inert cliches or
abstractions (e.g. "the evils of society").
Assumptions:
Beliefs about life, people, history, reasoning,
etc. that you don't state but are implied in your keyterms or in the logic of
your argument, that you simply take for granted and assume that your reader
will too. These should bear logical inspection, and if arguable they should not
be assumed but brought into the open and acknowledged.
Structure:
The sequence of your main sections, and the turning points between them. Your
sections should follow an apprehensible order: both the shifts between your
main topics (see Stitching) and your logic in putting one topic
or point after another should be apparent. But that order should also be flexible:
it should allow you to incorporate both brief pauses to reflect on what you
are doing and larger, deepening turns in your analysis. Briefer pauses
might be to define your terms or assumptions (what do I mean by this word? or,
what am I assuming here?); or consider a counter-argumenta possible
alternative position, or objection or problem, that a skeptical or resistant
reader might raise; or offer a qualification or limitation to the case
you have made (what you're not saying). On a larger scale, you might
turn to incorporate a complication that arises, a way in which the case isn't
quite so simple as you've made it seem (possibly by way of a counter-argument
that you must accept); or to draw out an implication (so what? what might be
the wider significance of the argument I have made? what might it lead to if
I'm right? or, what does my argument about a single aspect of this suggest about
the whole? or about the way people live and think?); or to consider a possible
explanation for the phenomenon you have demonstrated (why might it be so? what
might cause or have caused it?).
Stitching:
Words that tie together the parts of your argument,
most commonly by (a) signaling transitions or acting as signposts to indicate
how a new ideasection, paragraph, sentencefollows from the one previous;
but also by (b) recollecting or repeating an idea or word or phrase used or
quoted earlier. Repeating keyterms helps especially at points of transition
from one section to another, to show how the new section fits in (the
repetition need not be mechanical or heavy-handed).
Sources:
Persons or documentsreferred to, summarized, or
quotedthat help you demonstrate the truth of your argument. They are
typically sources of factual information or data, opinions or interpretations
of your topic, comparable versions of the thing you are discussing, or
applicable general concepts. Whether youÕre affirming or challenging or
qualifying your sources, they need to be accurately presented, efficiently
integrated, and fairly acknowledged by citationsee Writing with Sources.
Orienting:
Bits of information, explanation, and summary that you give to orient the
reader who isn't expert in your subject, enabling such a reader to follow your
argument easily. The orienting question is, what does my reader need, and when?
And the answer can take many forms: necessary factual information about the
text, author, or event (e.g. given in your introduction); a summary of a text
or passage about to be analyzed; pieces of information given along the way about
passages, people, or events mentioned (including announcing or set-up phrases
for quotations and sourcessee Writing with Sources. The challenge
is to orient briefly and gracefully.
Stance:
The implied relationship of you, as writer, to your
readers and your subject; how you implicitly position or characterize yourself
as analyst and characterize your readers. Stance is defined by such features as
style and tone (e.g. familiar or formal); presence or absence of specialized
language and knowledge; willingness or unwillingness to orient a general,
non-expert reader; use or avoidance of scholarly conventions of form and style.
You should establish your stance within the first few paragraphs of your essay
and keep it consistent.
Style:
The choices you make of words and sentence structure.
Your style should be exact (find the right word, don't settle for
approximations) and clear (emphasize the main idea or action of each sentence,
don't bury it), and generally plain without being flat (i.e. graceful and a
little interesting, so animated by your own presence, not stuffy).
Harvey, Gordon. "Elements of Academic Argument" The Academic Essay.